Um. Let's see. Meg's song is the version from the manga because that's what I had on hand while writing. Did I mention I'm writing this at work? I may not have a computer, but I have a typewriter. (The Dark Ages, I know.) Domestic!Subaru started because someone needed to make breakfast and it sure as heck was NOT going to be Tsuzuki. And it's his kitchen anway. And because, well, I have this theme going in the Ramen Stall stories where Subaru's not frozen anymore. He can do things. He can grow and change if he chooses. But I can also tell I've been reading too many DC Comics fanfics recently, particularly Batman and his Robins, because of Subaru's sleep patterns. Also, I refuse to go the fanon "sentient sakura tree" route. And now Aya's demanding that he feature in the next story. Grr. He just got the last one! (albeit, not in this universe)
Also... I'm not used to writing a story where I know the plot beforehand. I usually make it up as I go along. This time, though, I /know/ what's going to happen. It's freaking me out and making me very nervous because I can't tell if I'm telegraphing what's coming or being more boring/transparent than usual. If I am, PLEASE tell me. You'll still get more fic, I promise, and maybe it'll be better written for it.
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