Nightly Editing Count
Apr. 13th, 2012 11:26 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sakon76Flipping PoVs somewhat more rapidly on this section. Or maybe it just feels like it since I'm dealing with Higami and the people around him... who're geographically discrete from Marin&Briselied, and have never met them.
Calling it a night at page 190/620, and word count 125,300. Which is motion slightly in the wrong direction, but I hit a comment that basically said "shouldn't she be having an emotional reaction to this?" and dammit, he was right. (Bob's comments, in fact, are almost always right. He's one of the ones I pay attention to.) So the words added in slightly overwhelmed the words taken out. But it "feels" more cohesive now.
Calling it a night at page 190/620, and word count 125,300. Which is motion slightly in the wrong direction, but I hit a comment that basically said "shouldn't she be having an emotional reaction to this?" and dammit, he was right. (Bob's comments, in fact, are almost always right. He's one of the ones I pay attention to.) So the words added in slightly overwhelmed the words taken out. But it "feels" more cohesive now.
