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[sakon76]

Hah! Chapter four done and sent off to prereaders. Two of whom actually already got back to me about it. Yay! One mentioned inconsitent characterization of Marin in the first three chapter, which is about on the mark. Thing is, I thought I'd got a hold on her... and then she went hyper-jealous on me. So I went back and tried to regrasp her and toned that down a bit. She's still being territorial, but not so badly. I think as soon as I get to the rain scene in five she'll be back on balance again. I'd say she's badly socialized, but she's not... more like in an unfamiliar situation and trying desperately to stay atop things. Ahh, I should get off trying to explain her and just write her.

Baking bread again. V.2.0--slightly cooler water, and am letting the bread rise in an oven heated to "warm" setting. Let's see how it goes.

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[aishuu.livejournal.com]

I'm back, lovely! Give me to this weekend, and I should catch up. My apologies - it's been a rough time. ^_^;;

[sakon76.livejournal.com]

*pounce* You! More BB please! And any chance you might be online Thursday night? [You're one of the factors/people who're making me really consider attending Otakon next year.]