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Aug. 4th, 2003 01:20 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sakon76Hah. Chapter three done! Am thinking my problems with it were due to the fact that I'm not yet comfortable with Briselied, just as I wasn't comfortable with Marin in the beginning. But I'm getting there and starting to have a handle on both their characters. Am looking forward to their talk in a few chapters. In the meantime, Max and maybe Owen and possibly a certain cook mage/avatar duo are going to be the focus of the next chapter. Eeeeheeeheeeheee. ^^
