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[sakon76]

Chapter one character flaws smoothed out. I think I've got a handle on who Marin is supposed to be... for now, anyway. Sent out alpha draft of chapter one to lucky vict^H^H^H^Hprereaders.

Right, another page to write tonight for chapter 2!

Comments

[racerxmachina.livejournal.com]

Sorry for the delay on comments, but I should have something to send back to you on Saturday. Eric was making goo-goo eyes at me so that I would let him check email, and I was starting to get tired and not pay attention to what I was reading. So Saturday I should be able to let you know what I think.

[sakon76.livejournal.com]

Woo--thanks!