Aug. 4th, 2003
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Aug. 4th, 2003 01:20 pmHah. Chapter three done! Am thinking my problems with it were due to the fact that I'm not yet comfortable with Briselied, just as I wasn't comfortable with Marin in the beginning. But I'm getting there and starting to have a handle on both their characters. Am looking forward to their talk in a few chapters. In the meantime, Max and maybe Owen and possibly a certain cook mage/avatar duo are going to be the focus of the next chapter. Eeeeheeeheeeheee. ^^
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Aug. 4th, 2003 08:06 pmI have washed car. I have dead-headed roses. I have watered tomatoes. I have tied tomatoes to their trellis thingy. I have Been Productive{tm}. Go me.
I also have Max and Owen in the garden, being productive in their own way. Need to figure out their relationship in this universe. Is this still the Unrequited Love{tm} thing going on? Must find out. *stalks characters*
I also have Max and Owen in the garden, being productive in their own way. Need to figure out their relationship in this universe. Is this still the Unrequited Love{tm} thing going on? Must find out. *stalks characters*
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Aug. 4th, 2003 11:22 pmStill thinking about Briselied. Each of my four mains is haunted by a particular fairy tale or myth. For Marin it's "The Little Mermaid." For Briselied it's the story of Icarus. Marin is an intellectual and to her the story is only a story. Brise, however, is more active than her twin, a doer rather than a thinker. Icarus is thus more immediate to her. I need to keep this in mind for writing her. I also need to discover which stories Terren and Higami have in the background of their lives.