Odd as it may be to say considering my tendency to prefer happy fluffy things for RoTG I really liked this - It's a nice realistic view as to how Jack probably would be feeling and reacting after (although having said that, I would argue that Jack actually DID betray Bunny at least - Lynse of ffnet pointed out that the sort of reaction Bunny gives, the way he's so vitriolic, tends to only happen when someone feels their trust has been betrayed "we should never have trusted you" - implying that Bunny, at least, was at least as hurt by the fact that Jack broke his word to come back on time, even unintentionally, as the fact that the kids couldn't see him)