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NaNo, Day 18
Nov. 18th, 2010 11:25 pmStart point: 101015
End point: 101544
Words written today: 529
Total thus far: 18833
Started writing late tonight and basically editing the last chapter. Kitty's talk in the kitchens with Lily makes a little smoother sense now, and the scene of Ariss' announcement is vastly improved (drama/tension level increased!) by switching it from omniscient narrator PoV to the PoV of the audience Ariss is addressing. So still only on page 142, but tomorrow I get to review and support everything leading up to that scene where Marin's crying in her bath. Because it's a punch in the gut scene and it's going to be so awesome, but I need to build up to it, which I haven't yet.
But now, bed.
End point: 101544
Words written today: 529
Total thus far: 18833
Started writing late tonight and basically editing the last chapter. Kitty's talk in the kitchens with Lily makes a little smoother sense now, and the scene of Ariss' announcement is vastly improved (drama/tension level increased!) by switching it from omniscient narrator PoV to the PoV of the audience Ariss is addressing. So still only on page 142, but tomorrow I get to review and support everything leading up to that scene where Marin's crying in her bath. Because it's a punch in the gut scene and it's going to be so awesome, but I need to build up to it, which I haven't yet.
But now, bed.
