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NaNo, Day 4
Nov. 4th, 2010 10:44 pmStart point: 84023
End point: 84396
Words written today: 373
Total thus far: 3902
Not nearly as much written today as there should have been, but I've finished reviewing and am finally up to page 138 of 138. Edits today involved shifting an entire scene to the beginning of the chapter rather than the middle. It weakens the chapter structure (the other scene was a much stronger starting point), but it was temporally out of place. I rewrote an entire (different) scene from Rosemarinda's point of view into Higami's. It ended up better for it, though I still need to give Terren the PoV sometime soon.
Tomorrow I get to work on new stuff, the first of which is going to be the big and nasty "Terren knows the Big Bad Back Story and lets Ariss know this, and, oh, BTW, tells it to his siblings" scene. Yay drama!
(Hmm. And that, I guess, will be when I give Terren the PoV. Time to find out what's seething under his calm, in control, proper mien.)
End point: 84396
Words written today: 373
Total thus far: 3902
Not nearly as much written today as there should have been, but I've finished reviewing and am finally up to page 138 of 138. Edits today involved shifting an entire scene to the beginning of the chapter rather than the middle. It weakens the chapter structure (the other scene was a much stronger starting point), but it was temporally out of place. I rewrote an entire (different) scene from Rosemarinda's point of view into Higami's. It ended up better for it, though I still need to give Terren the PoV sometime soon.
Tomorrow I get to work on new stuff, the first of which is going to be the big and nasty "Terren knows the Big Bad Back Story and lets Ariss know this, and, oh, BTW, tells it to his siblings" scene. Yay drama!
(Hmm. And that, I guess, will be when I give Terren the PoV. Time to find out what's seething under his calm, in control, proper mien.)
