God, I love how even in a short space, you make all the characters come *alive* and seem like they *belong* in the same space together. Even Kenshin felt like he *belonged*, though he was ripped out of his own time period.

I loved the part with Subaru's dilemma in the beginning -- so nice to see him *getting on with life* and having found an almost perfect match, someone from a magical family who reminds him of Hokuto. The thing with her being a detective and him being the Sakurazukamori, though . . . that's almost worth expanding into a fic on its own.